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Darkjupiter
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Western US
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12 yrs ago, 6 mos ago - Sunday 10/25/09 - 4:34:18 PM EST (GMT-5)
Hi, what's up? Poet what you want, I'm bored and looking for anything interesting and funny  |
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groink
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Western US
Joined: 16 yrs, 9 mos ago
708 Posts
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12 yrs ago, 6 mos ago - Sunday 10/25/09 - 4:35:00 PM EST (GMT-5)
would you like a madrigal?
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Darkjupiter
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Western US
Joined: 13 yrs, 3 mos ago
5,202 Posts
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12 yrs ago, 6 mos ago - Sunday 10/25/09 - 4:36:06 PM EST (GMT-5)
*post
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12 yrs ago, 6 mos ago - Sunday 10/25/09 - 4:36:10 PM EST (GMT-5)
Poet what I want eh?
I.
castrating delusions
feeding the fat
fire burning to chimera
eyes blinded
allusion imminent experience
embracing my disease
thirsting pious blood
draining free
liberty rotting within
and i long for satori warm piercing embrace
accepting self
II.
serenity does not reside in consciousness
everyday
death still fills the air
slaughter
corruption
nirvana lives
tears no longer selfish
incited stimulated
the martyr slain
deaf ears tongue avowal
burdened
enlightened
eye
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Darkjupiter
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Western US
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12 yrs ago, 6 mos ago - Sunday 10/25/09 - 4:36:19 PM EST (GMT-5)
On Sunday 10/25/09 - 4:35:00 PM groink wrote:
would you like a madrigal? |
sure...... |
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KnifeGoingIn
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Canada
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12 yrs ago, 6 mos ago - Sunday 10/25/09 - 4:36:20 PM EST (GMT-5)
Once again, we are told about boredom, as if that changes anything for the poster.
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RandyAddict
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Canada
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12 yrs ago, 6 mos ago - Sunday 10/25/09 - 4:36:42 PM EST (GMT-5)
Niiiice........ ^
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Darkjupiter
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Western US
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5,202 Posts
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12 yrs ago, 6 mos ago - Sunday 10/25/09 - 4:37:13 PM EST (GMT-5)
On Sunday 10/25/09 - 4:36:10 PM JayY wrote:
Poet what I want eh? I. castrating delusions feeding the fat fire burning to chimera eyes blinded allusion imminent experience embracing my disease thirsting pious blood draining free liberty rotting within and i long for satori warm piercing embrace accepting self II. serenity does not reside in consciousness everyday death still fills the air slaughter corruption nirvana lives tears no longer selfish incited stimulated the martyr slain deaf ears tongue avowal burdened enlightened eye |
Your pretty good JayY, I respect that about you |
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KnifeGoingIn
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Canada
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12 yrs ago, 6 mos ago - Sunday 10/25/09 - 4:40:30 PM EST (GMT-5)
Posting what I want:
For you, my heart...ripped from my chest.
Eviscerated, I am.
And if I could,
I would plunge my fingers
through my chest and rip out my heart
and give it to you.
A pulpy mass of morbid diathesis.
In addition to my heart, there are some small organs that I want to give you:
glands... sweetbreads... variety meats.
I'm offering these gifts.
Rare gifts.
I know that they don't amount to much in the face of what you've given me.
I've heard these organs can't survive outside the body for more than a few hours.
But I'll try to get there as soon as I can.
Whatever happens,
it will be on me.
On my heart.
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12 yrs ago, 6 mos ago - Sunday 10/25/09 - 4:42:38 PM EST (GMT-5)
farting poops is the best kind of farting
farting air is not so great
it's okay
but
nothing to write home about
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Darkjupiter
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Western US
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12 yrs ago, 6 mos ago - Sunday 10/25/09 - 4:43:31 PM EST (GMT-5)
On Sunday 10/25/09 - 4:40:30 PM KnifeGoingIn wrote:
Posting what I want: For you, my heart...ripped from my chest. Eviscerated, I am. And if I could, I would plunge my fingers through my chest and rip out my heart and give it to you. A pulpy mass of morbid diathesis. In addition to my heart, there are some small organs that I want to give you: glands... sweetbreads... variety meats. I'm offering these gifts. Rare gifts. I know that they don't amount to much in the face of what you've given me. I've heard these organs can't survive outside the body for more than a few hours. But I'll try to get there as soon as I can. Whatever happens, it will be on me. On my heart. |
Your pretty good yourself Knife, no wonder I have respect for you  |
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Darkjupiter
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Western US
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12 yrs ago, 6 mos ago - Sunday 10/25/09 - 4:44:19 PM EST (GMT-5)
On Sunday 10/25/09 - 4:42:38 PM HylianNinja wrote:
farting poops is the best kind of farting farting air is not so great it's okay but nothing to write home about |
Wow.... |
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KnifeGoingIn
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Canada
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12 yrs ago, 6 mos ago - Sunday 10/25/09 - 4:44:52 PM EST (GMT-5)
I don't write poems though. I write feelings. Which are longer and more in-depth.
But I love that poem, so I posted it. I dunno why I like it so much.
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Darkjupiter
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Western US
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12 yrs ago, 6 mos ago - Sunday 10/25/09 - 4:46:49 PM EST (GMT-5)
On Sunday 10/25/09 - 4:44:52 PM KnifeGoingIn wrote:
I don't write poems though. I write feelings. Which are longer and more in-depth. But I love that poem, so I posted it. I dunno why I like it so much. |
I can understand why you like it, I do too, writing about feelings is easier but kinda harder for me |
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Lanoira666
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Eastern US
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12 yrs ago, 6 mos ago - Sunday 10/25/09 - 8:07:58 PM EST (GMT-5)
Poetry:
And let the blood fall like rain...
For those who will die will be men and women; children and infants...
Only the truly strong will survive.
So let the blood rain and let the blood fall...
One day their weakness will doom them all.
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forsakenone
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Eastern US
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12 yrs ago, 6 mos ago - Sunday 10/25/09 - 8:17:58 PM EST (GMT-5)
Day o' wrath!
Day o' mourning!
See fulfilled the prophet's warning!
Heaven and earth in ashes burning!
And from Poe's "The Raven"
"Quoth the Raven, nevermore"
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Lanoira666
Female,
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Eastern US
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12 yrs ago, 6 mos ago - Sunday 10/25/09 - 8:22:02 PM EST (GMT-5)
I love "The Raven"!!!
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12 yrs ago, 6 mos ago - Sunday 10/25/09 - 8:26:45 PM EST (GMT-5)
There once was a man from Ealing,
Who got on a bus to Darjeeling,
A sign said on the door,
"Please don't spit on the floor."
So he carefully spat on the ceiling.
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12 yrs ago, 6 mos ago - Sunday 10/25/09 - 8:28:48 PM EST (GMT-5)
There once was a monarch from Prussia
Whose wife didn't want him to touch her
Despite all his pleading
And years of inbreeding
Made him look like a wrestler from Russia
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12 yrs ago, 6 mos ago - Sunday 10/25/09 - 8:31:38 PM EST (GMT-5)
harry had no need to fart
as he was happily carting his cart
and then all the sudden
with massive concussion
he farted with all of his heart
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Darkjupiter
Male,
13-17
Western US
Joined: 13 yrs, 3 mos ago
5,202 Posts
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12 yrs ago, 6 mos ago - Monday 10/26/09 - 9:34:29 AM EST (GMT-5)
Lots of poems o.o
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12 yrs ago, 6 mos ago - Monday 10/26/09 - 9:53:37 AM EST (GMT-5)
You said: poet whatever you want.
So our rhymes we decided to flaunt.
Haiku, limerick, or free-verse.
Your typo was your curse.
Because that's the thing we all taunt.
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